Showing posts with label essays. Show all posts
Showing posts with label essays. Show all posts

Sunday, February 7, 2021

ELA - Enough of the Essays!

I wonder how many more ELA teachers we would have if we didn’t have to grade essays. 

No really. 


I’m serious. 


I myself am looking for ways to continue my love of literacy and teaching children the joy of reading and writing, without having to be an ELA teacher. 


Because I love it. 


Yesterday, we literally geeked out about syntax and diction as we looked at Langston Hughes‘s poem, Mother to Son, and talked about the word choices, and painted pictures. 

The prompt was simple, “What’s the story?”

The kids loved it, I loved it. 


They wrote such amazing things. They found passion, made connections, related. And I did nothing but give them the moment.


It was one of those, what I call, Robin Williams moments. 


But then I came home and spent two hours immersed in essays. Essays that have created pressure in my life to get graded and back. 


We’re on a timeline, have expectations. The kids need to hear feedback about their work. Parents want a grade. 


It's not fun. 


And yet, I love to work with writing. That’s fun. The building, the improving, the idea-sharing. 


It’s time-consuming but satisfying. Hard work but pleasing.


But then there are the 140+5 paragraph essays to give a final grade to.  


Yes, the hard graft is done, and these are much quicker to check than when I had to get feedback on the introductions, the body paragraphs, the conclusions.....and therein lies the rub. 


It isn’t so much the grading of the essays, it’s the fact that I’m grading these essays the week after I’ve been up late every night giving feedback on the rest of the writing.  


And of course, with the virtual students, the issue that they keep working according to the plan, ignoring your feedback.


It’s why people don’t choose to teach ELA. How many great teachers opt out because of this?


Because there is little I like more in life than sharing great writing with kids, giving feedback, diving in, and analyzing. That’s fantastic. The kids love it, I believe it makes them better students of everything. 


Imagine a world where the focus was on that. Imagine a world where we created better readers and writers by studying and enjoying great writing.  


But they have to write, right?


The only way to become a great writer is by writing. And that writing needs to be shared and the craft grown through advice and suggestions. And that’s my job.  But there has to be a better way to do this. 


I talk to people all the time who say they would’ve taught ELA if it wasn’t for the grading. I talk to people all the time who now teach different content areas but miss ELA. They just had to switch over because of all the grading. These are good teachers who would’ve made a difference.  They are still good teachers. They are still making a difference. 


But the world of ELA needs them.


Oh I know, there are plenty of tricks and strategies - plenty of ways to just focus on part of the essay, to divide up the feedback, to use peer feedback....and if we could build our units with more writing time, perhaps that would be doable. It’s time to sit and redesign.  To be honest though, whenever I do that, the load seems greater. And even more to the point, in our current virtual reality, the amount of feedback needed to support our young writers’ growth is immense.


The grass is always greener, right?  I look with envy at other content areas. What was I thinking not transferring my social studies and science qualifications to Georgia?  


But then I have lessons like that one this week.  


Well, enough musings...I have essays to grade. 

Saturday, November 3, 2018

Editing Essays with Walk'N'Talk!


Walk'N'Talk in ACTION!

I always tell my students to read their writing out loud. 

I know that when I read my writing out loud, I always find the places where I should’ve put a comma, where I’ve missed some simple spelling, even where I’ve missed a word (I’m not sure how that happens by the way, but it seems to be something I do a lot! Especially when I text talk my writing first).  Anyway, I'm a broken record on this. I’ll ask my students, "What is one thing you could do to make your editing process better?" and they will invariably say, "Read my work aloud!" sometimes they even chorus it.  And then they never do it. 

Ever.

So there’s a disconnect. A big one!  They can spout off the answers, but don't do it.

And then, this week, off the top of my head, off-the-cuff, in the middle of a lesson, I found a way to make it happen.

We were coming to the end of writing time for an informative essay when a student came up to tell me that he was finished with his writing. I looked over the writing quickly, and I saw that the writing was replete with errors, even though the 'voice' side of things was pretty good. So without really thinking about it, I said, "Why don’t you go walk up and down the hallway, and read this aloud to yourself. Just hold the computer out in front of you, look where you're going and read it a couple times. See if you can find any mistakes,"  and off he went.  Then I had another student claim that they were finished.  Again, I looked over the work quickly, and thought, maybe this is something I should do with everyone. So I gave the same instructions and off she went. 

As I watch the students stopping and making corrections to the hallway, I thought… This has potential. So I quickly went to my computer and adjusted my instructions on the board.  Now they read, 

When you think that you are finished...
Visit Mrs. B for permission to 

WALK'N'TALK!

Well, that got their attention - now they were excited. 

I had to create rules-because they love it when they think it’s a real 'activity'. 

So, here were the instructions.
  • Walk the hallway three times.  As you walk, read your work aloud.
  • As you come across a mistake, stop, and stand still, both feet on one tile (I told them that this was very important - I couldn't help it, they were so serious).
  • Make your corrections. 
  • Once corrected, you may continue.
  • Keep walking, keep stopping to make corrections, keep walking, until you have walked and talked the hallways three times!
The results were unbelievable. Well, not really, when you consider that all writers know just how powerful reading work aloud is, but the kids were blown away.  I had students telling me that they had found five or six mistakes - sidenote, they were amazed by this!! They told me they had fixed punctuation, found run on sentences, seen things that just didn't make sense...they were as excited as I was! 

As I look over the finished work today, I realized how much 'cleaner' the essays were from the kids later in the day, after I implemented the Walk'N'Talk wholesaele. 

I’m going to make this a permanent strategy, part of our editing list - and the next time I do it, I’m going to tally the number of edits they tell me they make. I think it would make for some interesting action research. Plus, how powerful this would be for the kids to see - to show them just how much this can help them with their writing. 

#Powerful. #ItWasJustALastMinuteIdea #ThingsTheWork

It’s 2025 …

Things are looking very different at the governmental level. Protections have been taken away from book banners, and there’s a different fie...